Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Process paragraph: Explanation

In class, we talked about Process paragraphs. We made a peanut butter and jelly sandwich and we described order of the pictures about traveling. The Peanut butter and jelly paragraph would be considered a "how to" process paragraph. The other process paragraph is an "explanation". This tells the reader how a particular event occurred or how something works.

Below I have given you a list of transitions I would like you to include in your process paragraph. You do not have to use them all.

(initially, until, afterward, before, when, as soon as, during, meanwhile, finally)

I would like for you to write an explanation paragraph for this assignment. Whatever topic or theme, however, it has to tell how an event occurred or how something works.

18 comments:

  1. These points are very important because knowing how to write in English, namely read in English gives us life in all aspects of everyday life. Opens the doors to us in the work area.

    I do not see anything negative in having knowledge of the language, I see the question a bit contradictory. I think if I do not learn English would get in trouble ..

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  2. lorna Diaz VicentyJune 3, 2011 at 6:47 PM

    I like it because I have to try to think and then write in English and it helps me to expand areas that do not put into practice all the tiempo.Es very important to know the procedure to do a paragraph on how the body has an introduction and conclusions. I like the activities that give us ideas but are a little difficult but you can.

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  3. When a robbery takes place, the police has to be called. First you have to grab the phone and call 911. Then I talk to the police and explain to them the situation. After a while, they arrive and begin searching for the criminal. Alot of time may pass while the search occurs. Finally, after investigating the criminal is arrested and taken to jail.

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  4. Creating a playstation network account has many steps. First, we put the country were you are and click confirm. Then, you put yor bitrth date and the region. After, that you have to write your first and last name and a password. Later, you have to invent or use your own name as an online ID. Afther that you restart the plastation account. Finally, you have done your playstation account and you can log in it and start dowloading many things as movies games and other staff.

    Joacim Rivera Fernandez

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  5. lorna Diaz VicentyJune 5, 2011 at 7:29 PM

    Is an example of when a patient goes to hospital. You start taking her information then you cojes vital signs. You ask how it feels after it notifies the physician. the doctor refers you drugs after talking with the doctor explains the procedure to the patient and give the drugs and then expect to observe the patient. After all the patient will tell if improvement in all proceedings and documents made ​​it.

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  6. The french toast are a very option of breakfast delightful, different and esay to do. To make it we need bread, eggs, milk, sugar, vanilla, cinnamon, syrup and butter. First, take the eggs and to mix it with sugar, milk, vanilla and the cinnamon in a envase (everything to the personal taste). Second, we mix all the ingredients in the plate. Then, take a frying and put it to heat. Now, put a litter amount butter in the frying. Wait to heat it. Now, take the bread slides and to dip it in the mixed of eggs. After, put the slides in the frying and wait that are golden brown. Then, with a knife cut the toasts in a triangular form. Finally, put the slides in a plate and put on it syrup. And ready to eat!

    Deborah M. Fagardo

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  7. Womens like to look pretty every day. To look pretty they put makeup on and this takes time and several steps. First, you have to wash your face and dry with a towel. Next, prep your face by applying some base on all your face.As soon as it drys apply some face powder, make sure to apply it even on all your face. After that apply some eye shadow of your preference by sweeping the color across the lid and up to your brow-bone. Afterward apply eye liner on your eye lids and then mascara on your eye lashes. Next apply blush of your preference, place powder blush on the apple of your cheek and gently brush up your cheekbone toward your hairline. Finally, apply some lipstick of your favorite color and you're ready to start your day feeling pretty.

    Zuni O. Rivera

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  8. The journey in the vacation was awesome for many reason. During the arrival, we was so happy for the pool and the waterfalls. First, we go to the Rio Loco, that was a great place.Then we go to the pool and we enjoyed with the friends. Next,we go to the "chorreras", but was the line was long. Finally, we finished the day with happiness in our hearts.


    Jesus Ortiz (part of this story is truth)

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  9. my life as a student at the UAA is not an easy, first i am not of the University of religion, Two items i like me a lot with the rules and do not in themselves. And had to change my wardrobe and i want put on garments. Also had a relantionship with God good for that part the university helped me an one increase my faith and beliefs, and also helped me in class and lot to learn, i can feel completely safe in what i do when i'm making an intervention in the nersing area.

    josmariane Ramos

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  10. The process of eating and nutrition is a very important process for our body. This process gives us the energy we need to do everything. The process begins before we eat, when we feel hungry it’s because our body is saying that he needs more fuel, this is the beginning of the process. During this stage the gastrointestinal tract is getting ready, it secretes the enzimes and everything we need to absorb the nutrients we eat. Initially we take the food to our mouths, this is the beginning of the next stage, meanwhile food is in our mouths being chewed, our stomach is getting ready. As soon as we swallow the first bite the stomach begins a series of movements to convert what we just eat in a shake, until everything is not ready the stomach does not stop working, when everything is ready the stomach allow food pass little by little, to the small intestine, this is where the real absorption of nutrients begins. While food passes through the small intestine the nutrients are absorbed by some specialized cells. After, the food pass through, all small intestine, gets to the large intestine, this is the last step of the process, but before the process end, there is one last thing to do, the large intestine absorb the water, mixed with the wastes to make a solid mix and finally the process is over when this solid mix is leaves the body.

    David Ramos Williams

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  11. There are many ways in making a paper airplane, but with only nine steps you will have a simple but fun paper airplane to play with. First, you’re going to need a sheet of printing paper which you will fold in half and crease. Secondly, you will open the folded paper so that the crease is pointing up and fold two adjacent corners to the middle of the crease. Next, fold the point made in the previous step down to the crease so that the flaps are tucked under this fold. At this time it looks like the back of an envelope. Now fold the two corners created by the previous step to the center crease so that the points are about 2/3 of the way down the center crease flap. Next fold up the tip that has been covered in the previous step so that it secures the flaps against the crease. Then fold the paper airplane in half so that all the folds made in the previous steps are facing outwards. At this time, fold the wings down to the bottom so that the wings are perfectly aligned with the bottom of the airplane. Now, unfold the wings slightly so that they are perpendicular to the body of the airplane and form a flat surface next to each other. Finally test fly to get the feeling of how to throw the paper airplane, start of gently till you feel comfortable enough to throw it harder and make tricks. With these simple steps your can be on your way to having a good time flying your handmade paper airplane.

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  12. Airplane Instructions

    Yarissel Canales Cruz

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  13. The process of guiding a car is very simple. First, you have to open the car. Then, put the keys to turn it on. Later, press with your right foot to the brake lever. Now, with your hand, holding the brake lever, change the gear lever of parking to drive. Now, take down the emergence lever. After that, turn on the lights. Then, move the guide carefully. Finally, you can step on with your right foot the lever to move. With these steps we can see that is very easy and simple to turn on a car and drive.

    Carlos M. Mercado Rivera

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  14. Simple Steps to a chicken with mango. First, defrost the chicken to marinate the meat with all the condiments it carries. Next prepare a mango jam, that it requires boiling the mango. put in blender. Then put a pot and place the mango simmered with a little sugar and let cool. After the chicken to fry with a little oil when cooked and golden brown jam made it over leaving a while. Finally serve the dish and leave it clean. Following all this steps you can have a delicious chicken with mango.

    Gretchen Matias Ayala

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  15. Mote Huesillos (Chilean Dessert)
    It is a very tasty and easy dessert to make.
    This requires wheat and dried peaches.

    1-First i have to open the bag of dried peaches and pour into a pot of water to hydrate the peaches. After that the peaches are hydrated i have put it in another pot with water on the cooking, I add cinnamon, brown sugar and is important put it to boil, the water is not wasted,but if used as a beverage. Later we took another pot with water and i have to put on to the kitchen to boil. Now i have to take the bag (wheat) and i have to put in hot water and cook it like rice. When ready the mote (wheat) we took all the water and let it go. Then, when ready the mote (wheat) and the (Peach), wait for it to cool, put it in a fridge and when you eat it cold.we finally served in glasses, juice, peach and wheat, all mixed and cold
    Conclusion. It is a typical soft drink in Chile very delicious, which is used specifically for pacifying the summer heat.

    Luis Martinez Benitez

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  16. Rice and beans is a very easy recipe to make. Here are some steps to making rice and beans. Initially, the first step is to get all the ingredients together. You will need 2 cups of rice, 1 can of red beans, 1 onion, 1 green pepper, 2 cloves of garlic, 2 spoons of tomato sauce salt to your preference. Now that all the ingredients are together we can start the process by cutting all the seasonings. You steam the vegetables in oil for a minute. You then add the sauce and the cup of beans. Let the beans sit until they absorb the flavor for a minute. You then add three cups of water. Next step is to wait until the water boils. During this process as soon as the water starts boiling you then add the rice. Let the rice dry and finally cover it and let it cook for 30 minutes and lower the fire.
    Now we have a very tasty and nutritional meal that only took no more than 40 minutes.

    Kirsys Perez

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  17. I initially began exercising at the park, i walk for several hours, until i got tire of walkig. afterward i began to lift weights before going to school in the mornig,during this semester am going to be exercising more, meanwhil am going to stay in a stric diet,as soon as i lose the weigh i wan to lose i will finally fill good. gilbert carrero

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  18. Almost every mornings, when I studying, I eat cereal for breakfast. It is very easy and quickly, perfect for that days when we are late to go to school or work. Firs, I take a deep plate and a spoon. After that, I take the milk and the cereal. Then I put a portion of cereal and milk in my plate. Almost finally, I put everything in their places, the milk in the refrigerator and the cereal in the larder. Finally I ate my cereal.

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